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Mordecai and Tajabel walking away from an old cathedral in the distance.

I had a lot of fun working on this one once I really got going on it, and taking on the challenge of
things I normally avoid drawing, like man made structures. Also very happy about how this one came
out!

I hope you both like it <3
If there is anything I missed, just notify me and I'll fix it up.


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Mordecai belongs to :iconatroci:
Tajabel belongs to :icondelmorii:
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

OKAY woah critique thing on this is cool. I don't honestly know what to critique about your anatomy, it's quite just stunning and I'm not good on that level but I think I can help with the background and the likes!
First I'll start out with my attempt at a critique. For one the characters are great, but I kind of feel like that dragon ( creature xD ) and her are just massive compared to the cathedral and couldn't fit inside of it because of the size of his tail. It doesn't get much smaller in the back towards the castle and maybe I'm just dumb and looking at this wrong but it just seems large compared to the cathedral. (Or it may be that I see it's lifted so it's supposed to be closer? My eyes play tricks.)
Likewise I think things in the background may be a bit lighter, just a little I dunno again this may be just me. Due to atmosphere of things things farther away are generally lighter but you seem to have that going on great.
BUT on a positive note the grass is so well done, it's not that willy-nilly random strokes. It seems something odd to be praised but it's so nicely detailed and subtle it still gives you that look and texture of grass without being too distracting.
The tones also are just so well distrubuted throughout the picture, the characters blend so nicely with one another as well as with the background; they stand out but they don't look as if they're pasted on. And even though you said you don't like drawing buildings yours is -fantastic- I can right away tell it's of course a cathedral and it's very well done.
I can't express enough to you though how great your detail is, from those soft folds in clothing to the muscles it's all just amazing and beautiful. You have a unique and beautiful style Levi and I hoped this helped for my first lame critique :'D